Encouraging words

"Dear Shaz,

Thank you for the manuscript. I finished it yesterday and have been digesting my reactions.

I would definitely encourage your friend to keep submitting it and keep writing. It has a strong and distinct voice that I found generally enjoyable, entertaining and easy to keep with.

I found many of the observations funny and the events sad/thought provoking/informative.

I can offer other comments but don't want to overstep the bounds as I think you said you were just looking for a broad reaction.

How would you like me to arrange to return it to you, and also, when is our next book group?

Regards,
Heather"